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What do you think of our procedural instructions?
Room 1 have written some instructions on HOW TO PLAY HOPSCOTCH. Let us know how they worked.
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HIP HOORAY FOR YOU ALL! THANK YOU FOR SHARING YOUR INSTRUCTIONS WITH US!
The easiest instructions to follow were set out very well. Well done!
We think that neat writing is important when you are trying to follow instructions.
Most of your instructions have each step in the right order. We think is very important.
Some instructions were a bit hard to understand because there were spelling mistakes.
Some of the rules of HOPSCOTCH may have needed to be a bit clearer for someone who didn't know them.
We thought that instructions that had the verbs at the beginning of each step were easier to follow.
Some of the instructions would have been easier to understand if you had drawn a diagram of a HOPSCOTCH field.
Well done, many of your instructions had a title about what the instructions were going to be about.
Be mindful of the fact that procedures still need capital letters and fullstops.
You might like to use words other than then in your instructions eg. next, after, first, second, last.
It would be helpful if you could set your instructions out in steps. eg. Step 1 then Step 2 etc.
You may need to add some more detail to your instructions eg. what number you have to jump on first.
Hi Room 1, we had lots of fun following your instructions about how to play hopscotch. Thank you!