built by owl on May 10, 2010 14 posts so far
What do you think of our procedural instructions?
Room 1 have written some instructions on HOW TO PLAY HOPSCOTCH. Let us know how they worked.
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Anonymous says

HIP HOORAY FOR YOU ALL! THANK YOU FOR SHARING YOUR INSTRUCTIONS WITH US!

Anonymous says

The easiest instructions to follow were set out very well. Well done!

Anonymous says

We think that neat writing is important when you are trying to follow instructions.

Anonymous says

Most of your instructions have each step in the right order. We think is very important.

Anonymous says

Some instructions were a bit hard to understand because there were spelling mistakes.

Anonymous says

Some of the rules of HOPSCOTCH may have needed to be a bit clearer for someone who didn't know them.

Anonymous says

We thought that instructions that had the verbs at the beginning of each step were easier to follow.

Anonymous says

Some of the instructions would have been easier to understand if you had drawn a diagram of a HOPSCOTCH field.

Anonymous says

Well done, many of your instructions had a title about what the instructions were going to be about.

Anonymous says

Be mindful of the fact that procedures still need capital letters and fullstops.

Anonymous says

You might like to use words other than then in your instructions eg. next, after, first, second, last.

Anonymous says

It would be helpful if you could set your instructions out in steps. eg. Step 1 then Step 2 etc.

Anonymous says

You may need to add some more detail to your instructions eg. what number you have to jump on first.

owl says

Hi Room 1, we had lots of fun following your instructions about how to play hopscotch. Thank you!

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